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Rates of smoking in some land
ReplyDeleteThe graph shows the rates of smoking in some land and compares between men and women per 1000 people.
In 1960, the number of men who smoking were 600. After five years there was a slight decrease. In 1970, the number of men who smoking were between 500 and less than 600. In five years after, there were only 500 smokers. Smoking in the year 1980 decreased to less than 500 in relation to men. In the year 1985 there were only 400 smokers. After five years there was a gradual decrease. Rates of smoking decreased sharply between the year 1990 and 1995 in relation to men. It continued to decline in the year 2000.
On the other hand, the number of women who smoking were only about 100 in the year 1960. Between the year 1960 and 1965 there was a sharp rise and continued to rising slightly until the year 1970. Rats of smoking increased sharply between the year 1970 and 1975 and rose to almost 300. Between the year 1975 and 1980 it remained the same and stopped at 300 smokers. In the year 1985, there was a dramatic fall and continued until the year 1990. Between the year 1990 and 1995 there was a little bit sharp decrease in number of smoking women dropped to around 200. In the year 2000, rates of smoking women did not change that much and stopped at 300 smokers.
The graph predicts that rates of smoking in that land could fall dramatically in the future.
Mojtaba Almohana
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██▓▒░ Rates of smoking in Someland ░▒▓██
ReplyDeleteThe graph shows the rates of smoking in Someland for men and women from 1960 to 2000.
The number of men who were smoking between 1960 and 2000 was decreasing in general. However, the number of women who were smoking was increasing between the same years. In 1960, 600 men out of 1,000 people were smoking and less than 100 women were smoking. During the next 5 years, there was a decrease in the number of men smokers but the number of women were increasing. In 1970, there were less than 600 men smokers out of 1,000 people. However, there was a sharp increase from about 200 women smokers to more than 300 between 1970 and 1975.The number of men smokers was still decreasing from 500 men out of 1,000 people to less than 500 between 1975 and 1980 but there wasn’t change in the rate of women smokers. The number of men smokers was 100 more than the number of women smokers in 1985. Between 1985 and 1990 both numbers of men and women smokers were decreasing. The number of men smokers became less than 400 and the number of women was less than 300 in 1990. Between 1990 and 1995, there was a decrease in both rates of men and women smokers from about 400 to less than 300 men smokers and from about 300 to over 200 women smokers. 5 years later, the rates of men and women were almost near to each other. I think the number of men smokers was much more than the number of women smokers maybe because most women in the past weren’t working outside their homes so they didn’t feel under stress. However, when they started working the number of women became more.
In conclusion, even though the number of women smokers was increasing in general but from 1980 to 2000 there was a decrease so I think the number of both men and women smokers will probably continue decreasing in the future.
By: FADEL AL DAHNIM
ID: 381901273
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DeleteIn this essay I'm going to talk about rate smoking in some land between men and women and what hapend between year 1960 and 200.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, as we can see in the graph in year 1960, the number of men who smoking were 600. After five years there was gradual decreased and it was around 570. In year 1970 the number continued decreasing. In year 1975 there was a slight decreas and the number were 500 per 1000 men. Between year 1975 to 1985 there was sharp decrease and the number went to 400. After five years there was a drop and the number became above 300. Between year 1990 and 2000 there was a huge decrease and the number went from around 400 to almost 200.
Secondly, in 1960 the number of women who smoking were below 100. After five years the number increased and it were almost 200. Between year 1965 and 1970 the number remain the same. After five years there was a big incrase the number went to above 300. Between year 1975 and 1980 there was no change. After that the number were gradually decreased. Until year 2000 the number became 200.
In conclusion, I talked about the number of smokers from men and women between year 1960 and 2000 . I think that the number of smoker will decrease in the coming years.
Name: hussein almohsin
ID: 381901358
In this essay I'm going to talk about the numbers of mens and women's from the period 1960s to 2000
ReplyDeleteFirst, the number of men's who somke in the 1960s was 600 out of 1000 , then it decreased slightly in the 1970s to almost 550 after that it went down more in 1975 to be 500 from 1000 men who smoke and it went down more a little bit in 1980s to be between less than 500 and more than 400 but in the year 1985 the number reached 400 from 1000 after thet it dramatically decreased in 1990 from almost 400 to be almost 200 in the year 2000
In the other hand, women's who was smoke in the year 1960 was barely 100 out of 1000 but in 1650 that number went up to reachOut almost 200 and it Stabilized until 1970 after that it strongly increased in 1975s to be at least 300 and it also stabilizes until 1980 but it went down a little bit in 1990 to be less than 300 after that it decreased more to be almost 200 in the next five years it stayed at 200
In my point of view, I think those numbers are quite good comparing to the years but we all hope the smoking phenomenon to disappear in the next years
Abdullah alenezi
Id: 381900117
Rates of smoking in some land
ReplyDeleteIn this essay I'm going to talk about the rates of smoking in some land for men and women.
There was decrease between men and women who are smoking. In the 1960 was the highest number of smoking for men. It was around 600 men. In contrast to the women the lowest number of smoking was in 1960 almost 100 women. As what I can see the number of smoking for men started to decrease year after year until 2000 the number of men who was smoking between 200 and 250. In the 1970 until 1975 there was a sharp increase for women who was smoking after that in 1980 started to decrease. In 2000 the number of smoking was 200 for women.
In conclusion, people who was smoking know about the results of it. Generally the number of people who are smoking will decrease year after year. The government should encourage people to stop smoking.
Abdullah Alajmi
381900823
Smoking is a real problem in our life.
ReplyDeleteIn this essay I will describe a graph which is shows Rates of smoking in somelands between 1960 to 2000.
First of all from 1960 to 1970 there was a slightly decrease from 600 to 560. Also, from 1970 to 1980 it decreased a bit from 560 to 490. Moreover, from 1980 to 1990 there was not a huge decrease its just went from 490 to 390. However, from 1990 to 1995 there was a sharply decreased from 390 to 270 in just five years. Finally, from 1995 to 2000 there was a very little decreased from 270 to 240.
On the other hand, the women’s graph is fluctuated. Firstly, between 1960 and 1970 there was a huge increase from 90 to 180. Also, from 1970 to 1975 there was a sharply increase from 180 to 310. Moreover, from 1975 to 1980 it was stable. However, between 1980 to 1990 there was a slightly decrease from 310 to 280. Also, between 1990 to 2000 there was a bit decrease from 280 to 200.
To sum up, I think that men were smoking a lot in the past then a lot of them started to quit it but women smokers increased to much then decreased a little bit.
Saad Alqahtani
381900362
I’m going to talk about Rate Smoking in
ReplyDeletesome land between the man and woman.
In these paragraph I will talk about the man in 1960, 600 man from 1000 they smoking it’s big problem. After 5 years in 1965 it was little decrease from 600 to 580. Next between year 1965 to 1970 it was decrease to 550. By the year 1970 to 1975 it decrease from 550 to 500. In the year 1975 to 1980 it was from 500 to 450. After that in 1980 to 1985 it was decrease 450 to 400 . Next from 1985 to 1990 it was just little decrease to 380. By the year 1990 to 1995 it was the biggest decrease from 380 to 280. In 1995 to 2000 it was from 280 to 250. The number of man they decrease year after year that something very good.
In these paragraph I will talk about the woman in 1960 to 2000. In 1960 it was increase from 90 to 190 out of 1000 woman. Next in year 1965 to 1970 almost 190. After that in year 1970 to 1975 it was increses from 190 to 310. By the year 1975 to 1980 it was the same 310 no change. In year 1980 to 1990 it little decrease from 310 to 290. Next from year 1990 to 2000 it was decrease from 290 to 200.
In conclusion I talk about Rate Smoking in
some land between the man and woman . The garph show as the number of the man decrease but the woman they change from year to year increase and in 1990 the number decrease.
Nasser almulhim
381900998
In this essay I’m going to talk about rate smoking in some lands. Between men and woman and what happened between year 1960 and 2000.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, as we can see in 1960 the graph shows that the number of smoking men was 600. And after five years there was a gradual decreased from 600 smokers to almost 580. In year 1970 the number continued decreasing. In year 1975 there was a slight decrease and the number were 500 per 1000 men. Between 1975 and 1985 year there was a sharp decreased and the number was about 400. After five years there was a drop and the number became more than 300. And between the year 1990 and 2000 there was a huge decrease and the number went from around 400 to almost 250.
Secondly, 1960 the number of woman who smoking was below 100. After five years the number increased to almost 200. Between 1965 and 1970 the number was stable. After five years there was a big increased the number was above 300. Between year 1975 and 1980 there was no change. after that the number was gradually decreased to year 2000 and it was 200.
In conclusion, we could see that the numbers of smokers is getting decreased. And it’s a better life.
Abdullah Alkatheeri
381900285
Rates of smoking in Someland
ReplyDeleteIn this essay I'm going to talk about the numbers of mens and women's from the period 1960s to 2000.
First of all from 1960 to 1970 there was a slightly decrease from 600 to 560. Also, from 1970 to 1980 it decreased a bit from 560 to 490. Moreover, from 1980 to 1990 there was not a huge decrease its just went from 490 to 390. However, from 1990 to 1995 there was a sharply decreased from 390 to 270 in just five years. Finally, from 1995 to 2000 there was a very little decreased from 270 to 240.
In these paragraph I will talk about the woman in 1960 to 2000. In 1960 it was increase from 90 to 190 out of 1000 woman. Next in year 1965 to 1970 almost 190. After that in year 1970 to 1975 it was increses from 190 to 310. By the year 1975 to 1980 it was the same 310 no change. In year 1980 to 1990 it little decrease from 310 to 290. Next from year 1990 to 2000 it was decrease from 290 to 200.
In conclusion,I talked about the number of smokers from men and women between year 1960 and 2000 . I think that the number of smoker will decrease year by year.
Name/Abdulaziz Al-Shebanah
ID/371100552
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ReplyDeleteIn this essay I am going to write about this diagram shows the number of smoker men and women from 1960 to 2000
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning the number of smoker men is decreased differently from year to another but in the first five years it slightly decreased. Secondly next ten years from 1965 to 1975 it actually went dawn sharply until it retched 400. Thirdly there was a hug drop from year 1975 to year 1985 about 100 men stop smoking. In1995 the number of smoker was almost 300 and that mean it decreased sharply. Then after five years the number of smoker men was about 250.
About women who smoke were a little in 1960 it was almost 100 but in the first five years the number of smoker increased strongly. Then it reminds the same for another five years till 1970. From 1970 to 1975 the number went up sharply, so in 1975 there were above than 300 smokers. In the next 15 years the number of smoker decreased slightly from above than 300 to almost 300.after that it dropped from year 1990 to 1995.in 2000 the number of smoker was exactly 200.
Many people think that if you have a lot of stress you need to smoke and that totally wrong however ,in my opinion they should do sport because it relies the stress.
abdulrahman saeed
Television sales
ReplyDeleteIn this essay , I’m going to describe the digram of the television sales per millions between 1996 and 1999.
The sales of televisions in 1996 was about 6 million. In the next year there was an increase in the sales of television from 6 million to about 8 million. In 1998 the sales of television has a grammatically increase from 8 million to above 10 million. But in 1999 the sales of the television decrease slightly from above 10 million to 10 million.
In conclusion, I think the television sales will continue in decreasing because of the new generation of smartphones which have a lot of applications to watch series and movies like YouTube and other you can watch from it.
Name : Talal Ahmed
I’d : 381900641
ReplyDeleteIn this essay, I am going to describe the graph which shows the rates of smoker men and women from 1960 to 2000.
At the beginning, in 1960 the number of smoker men is decreased differently from year to another but in the first five years it decreased. After that, from 1965 to 1975 it dropped sharply until 400. Then, it went down from year 1975 to year 1985 about 100 men stop smoking. Rates of smoking decreased sharply between the year 1990 and 1995 in relation to men. It continued to decline in the year 2000. On the other hand, women who smoke in 1960 it was almost 100 only. Between the year 1960 and 1965 the number of smoker increased strongly. Then it reminds the same for another five years till 1970. From 1970 to 1975 the number went up sharply, so in 1975 there were above than 300 smokers. In the next 15 years, the number of smoker decreased slightly from above than 300 to almost 300.after that it dropped from year 1990 to 1995. In 2000 the number of smoker was 200.
To sum up, as you can see, many people think that if you smoking is not very bad habit. In my point of view, I think the people who smoke should stop doing this bad habit.
NAME: Ahmad Alzahrani
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the graph shows the rates of smoking in some land - the men and women. in period 40year between 1960 and 100
ReplyDeletefirstly, the number of smoking women in year 1960 it was 200 per 1000. then between the year 1965 and 1970, it was less than 200 per 1000 and stays the same. five years later in 1975, it rise sharply to 300 per 1000. after that from 1980 to 1990, it was decreased from above 300 to less than 300 per 1000. after five years in 1995, it was decreased to almost 200 per 1000. then in year 2000, it was decreased to 200per 1000.
on the other hand, the rate of smoking men. in year 1960 it was 600 per 1000. then between the year 1965 and 1970, it decreased from 600 to less than 600 per 1000. five years later in 1975 it decreased to 500 per 1000. after that from 1980 to 1990, it was decreased from less than 500 to less than 400 per 1000, after five years in 1995, it was decreased sharply to almost 300 per 1000. then in year 2000 it decreased slightly to almost 200 per 1000.
In this essay I'm going to talk about rate smoking in some land between men and women and what hapend between year 1960 and 200.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, as we can see in the graph in year 1960, the number of men who smoking were 600. After five years there was gradual decreased and it was around 570. In year 1970 the number continued decreasing. In year 1975 there was a slight decreas and the number were 500 per 1000 men1980s to be between less than 500 and more than 400 but in the year 1985 the number reached 400 from 1000 after thet it dramatically decreased in 1990 from almost 400 to be almost 200 in the year 2000
Secondly, 1960 the number of woman who smoking was below 100. After five years the number increased to almost 200. Between 1965 and 1970 the number was stable. After five years there was a big increased the number was above 300. By the year 1975 to 1980 it was the same 310 no change. In year 1980 to 1990 it little decrease from 310 to 290. Next from year 1990 to 2000 it was decrease from 290 to 200.
In conclusion, people who was smoking know about the results of it. Generally the number of people who are smoking will decrease year after year. The government should encourage people to stop smoking.
In this essay I'm going to write about the graph which is shows Rates of smoking in somelands between 1960 to 2000.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all from 1960 to 1970 there was a slightly decrease from 600 to 560. Also, from 1970 to 1980 it decreased a bit from 560 to 490. Moreover, from 1980 to 1990 there was not a huge decrease its just went from 490 to 390. However, from 1990 to 1995 there was a sharply decreased from 390 to 270 in just five years. Finally, from 1995 to 2000 there was a very little decreased from 270 to 240.
On the other hand, the women’s graph is fluctuated. Firstly, between 1960 and 1970 there was a huge increase from 90 to 180. Also, from 1970 to 1975 there was a sharply increase from 180 to 310. Moreover, from 1975 to 1980 it was stable. However, between 1980 to 1990 there was a slightly decrease from 310 to 280. Also, between 1990 to 2000 there was a bit decrease from 280 to 200.
To sum up, I think that men were smoking a lot in the past then a lot of them started to quit it but women smokers increased to much then decreased a little bit.
Abdulrahman Al-somali
381901596
Rates of smoking in some land
ReplyDeleteThe graph shows the rates of smoking in some land and compares between men and women per 1000 people.
In 1960, the number of men who smoke were 600. five years later there was a decrease. In 1970, the number of men who smoke were between 500 and less than 600. In five years later, the number of men who smoke were 500 people. Smokers in the year 1980 decreased to less than 500 men. In the year 1985 there were only 400 smokers. After five years there was a gradual decrease. The rates of smoking decreased sharply between the year 1990 and 1995 in relation to men. It continued to decreace until the year 2000.
in 1960 the number of women who smoke were below 100. five years later the number increased and it almost reached 200. Between year 1965 and 1970 the number stayed the same. In the next five years there was a sharp increase the number went to above 300. Between year 1975 and 1980 the number of smoker women stayed the same. After that the number were gradually decreased. Until year 2000 the number became 200.
In conclusion, the number of smoking women and men decreased over the years, and It might still decrease until it disappear as we all hope so.
Bader Maziad Alotaibi
ReplyDeleteThe graph shows the rates of smoking in some land and compares between men and women per 1000 people
from 1960 to 2000.
First , we can see in the graph in year 1960, the number of men who smoking were 600. After five years there was gradual decreased and it was around 570. In year 1970 the number continued decreasing. In year 1975 there was a slight decreas and the number were 500 per 1000 men. Between year 1975 to 1985 there was sharp decrease and the number went to 400. After five years there was a drop and the number became above 300. Between year 1990 and 2000 there was a huge decrease and the number went from around 400 to almost 200.
In the other hand, women's who was smoke in the year 1960 was barely 100 out of 1000 but in 1650 that number went up to reachOut almost 200 and it Stabilized until 1970 after that it strongly increased in 1975s to be at least 300 and it also stabilizes until 1980 but it went down a little bit in 1990 to be less than 300 after that it decreased more to be almost 200 in the next five years it stayed at 200
in my point of view , I think that men were smoking a lot in the past then a lot of them started to quit it but women smokers increased to much then decreased a little bit.
Majed alharthi .
ID / 371900541
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