Tuesday, November 21, 2017

B1+ week #2: A problem-solution essay

Write an entry of at least 250 words individually (your own writing) about a problem-solution essay on (write on only ONE topic per week):

1-Traffic in Riyadh.
2-Eating junk food.
3-Pollution caused by factories in Jubail Industrial city.

You may collaborate with your classmates (discuss relevant ideas and vocabulary before and while writing) using Skype or face to face outside the classroom in pairs or small groups.
Clearly express your opinions, views and feelings about the topic.

Do Not worry about grammatical/spelling errors; this is a fluency rather than an accuracy activity.

26 comments:

  1. Eating junk food

    Many people know that eating healthy food is the best choice for our body. However, most people eat junk food everyday. Because that's a big issue, the problems and solutions will be explained.

    Some people prefer to buy fast food and this is a big problem for human body. The biggest problem of eating junk food every day is that it could cause some diseases. When people eat more fast food, the more they get fat. Another problem of eating junk food is that it's cheap and very easy to carry. Because of that, many people buy it instead of buying healthy food. As a result of that some people give up eating healthy food.

    As the problems of eating junk food is shown above, there are some suggested solutions. One of them is to produce more healthy food and make it easier to carry. Also, encouraging people to eat healthy food is a good idea by making films and videos to show them the benefits of eating healthy food and the dark side of eating fast food. Another solution is to band or at least decrease producing junk food. Beside that, it's a good idea to make healthy food cheaper so people can agree with that without any problem.

    In conclusion, it's a good idea to reduce junk food as possible as we can. Instead of that, producing more healthy food is the best suggestion.

    By: FADEL AL DAHNIM
    ID: 381901273

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  2. Today I’m going to talk about traffic in Riyadh the problem and solution

    From my point of view, the two biggest problem of traffic in Riyadh. Firstly, there are no public transport system such as, buses service and metro trains. Secondly, low fuel price that encourage people to buy gas vehicles.

    The first solution is build public transport system also build a metro tains stations to encourage people to use them and to make the traffic less. Secondly, make the fuel price high and put tax in gas. In addition to that, try to put tax in the roads and in downtown in Riyadh because it’s have alarab tower and alfaislya tower.

    To sum up, living in Riyadh is a good idea but the traffic is very bad. Also, the pobulation is huge.


    Abdullah Alkatheeri
    381900285

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  3. Eating Junk Food

    Today I am going to talk about some problems and solutions for eating junk food.
    Everybody eats junk food in their live time, but there are some eat more than others and that led to health problems.

    Firstly, eating juke food that have a lot of sugar is dangerous that led to Kidney failure. The solution for that is to take care of how many sugar goes to your mouth.

    Secondly, eating juke food causes overweight and that’s create problems for some people. To avoid that everyone should control how many times he goes monthly to fast food restaurants.

    Finally, eating junk food make the person more lazy, so everyone has to eat less junk food and eat more home made food.

    abdullah al-ateeq
    381900450

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  4. Today I’m going to write about eating junk food. Junk food is a serious problem for us.

    First of all, Many people eat junk food frequently. Although, they know that junk food is harmful for their body but still eating it. Also, sometime when they have food in their house the go to fast food restaurant. Moreover, junk food leads to a lot of diseases eating more sugar cause diabetes, you will be fat and you will infected by stroke or high blood pressure. Furthermore, we need to advise our friends and family to stay away from it.


    I will suggest some solutions that will help you to stay away from junk food and being healthy. Firstly, try to reduce eating junk food for instance eat junk food once a week with your friends or you family. Secondly, if you want to eat from a restaurant at least go to a healthy restaurant like subway and order a healthy food that keep away from diseases. Finally, try to replace any junk food by fruits and vegetables or natural juice.

    In conclusion, stay away from junk food and eat healthy.

    Name: Saad alqahtani
    ID: 381900362

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  5. Many people knows about traffic in Riyadh and how it is bad. Today I’ll talk about it.

    The problem of traffic in Riyadh, is how its so congested. Because its the capital of Saudi Arabia, and so many people lives there. Also because there is no alternative transportation, so everyone want to go with his own vehicle.
    And Unfortunately most of the drivers don’t follow the rules.

    We can fix these problems by following the rules of the roads. Also building metro will help, or more raods. Despite that introduce a road toll might help.



    Zyad batouk
    381901066

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  6. Can you imagine a city without a traffic jam . Riyadh is One of the crowded city in Saudi Arabia. In this essay I will write about problem and solution of traffic in Riyadh

    In this paragraph I will write about problems of traffic Riyadh. Firstly, there are many car accident , because there are many family they gave their there children a car without driving licenses and they cause a lot of traffic because they don't know how to drive carefully and safely also there are many drivers they don't care about traffic regulations

    In this paragraph I will write some solutions of traffic in Riyadh. Firstly, make a lot of checkpoints , because when they make a lot of checkpoints the The people who don't have a drive licenses will not drive. Secondly, four lines in the highway, because when they put three lines on the highway that will decrease the traffic

    In the conclusion I hope everyone have a safe driving


    Wail alshaya

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  7. In this essay I'm going to talk about the problem of eating junk food and how to solve it. In the first paragraph I will talk about the problem and it's reasons and in the second paragraph I'll talk about the solutions.

    junk food is a serious problem for our heath, many people eat junk food weekly because a couple of reasons, first reason is ads and commercials that shows junk food is delicious, and it's easy to make. The second reason is the price, people who eat junk food think that instead of buying healthy food I can buy much cheaper delicious fast food.

    There are many solutions for this problem. The first solution is government should ban junk food commercials, or at least put some tax on junk food commercials. The second solution is to aware people about junk food diseases by putting posters in public areas, or by uploading videos in the Internet.

    In conclusion, junk food is a really dangerous issue, it can cause diabetics, high blood pressure and cholesterol, eat healthy to stay healthy.

    Bader Mazyad Alotaibi
    ID:381900970

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  8. Today I am going to talk about the major case of health problem which is junk food and I am going to suggest some solutions for this serious issue.

    In my opinion people shouldn’t eat junk food because it’s effect there health badly, however many people eat it. First of all junk food is cooking with a lot of oil and oil can heart the hart of the one who eat it and make the blood heaver. Second many people don’t have enough time to cook a health food for themselves so they order junk food because it saves time.

    Actually I’ll offer couple of solutions. Firstly government can teak taxes from junk food restaurant and produce healthy cheap restaurant so people are going to bay healthy food. Secondly we can wearied the people from junk food and its effects.

    To some up in this essay I wrote about the problems of junk food and some solutions.
    Abdulrahman saeed

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  9. Traffic in Riyadh

    Riyadh is one of the most crowded cities in Saudi Arabia . Today we need to mention this problems and try to find the best solutions for it .

    The first problem is the traffic on the roads . Many people in Riyadh have their own cars because there are a little of public transport in Riyadh which encourage people to buy cars .
    The second problem is the accidents that happened daily on the highways . A lot of accidents happened by illegal drivers such as those who don't have license .

    On the other hand , There are many solutions that government can do to reduce the traffic in Riyadh . The first solution is to develop the public transport . The city needs to build more train and bus stations all around the city . The price of using the bus and trains should be cheap so that people can use it . If government does this , much fewer cars will be on the roads . However , the traffic will get worse during construction time . The second solution that government can do to reduce the traffic on the roads is to put taxes on the cars so not any person can buy a car . Fewer people will be to drive on the roads . However , if the government put taxes on the cars , the cars companies will lose a lot of money .

    To sum up , all the solutions to reduce the traffic in Riyadh have two sides . The positive side and the negative side .


    Mojtaba Almohana
    381901422

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  10. One of the big problems in riyadh is the traffic jam and today I’m going to talk about the traffic problem and some solutions.

    In my opinion the traffic jam came because of the population and unfortunately there are many drivers don’t follow the rules of road also there’s no public transportation.

    I think The solutions for this problem are building new roads and bridges and tunnels and put sanctions for drivers who don’t follow the rules of road for example make the fines expensive and build some public transportation such as buses and underground train because the public transportation can travel more people with less vehicles.

    At the end , the traffic jam in riyadh is horrible so we should find the main reason for this and solve it.

    Abdulaziz Melibari
    381901169

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  11. In these essay I'm going to talk about traffic congestion in Riyadh and I will suggest some solutions about it.

    There are many problems about traffic congestion in Riyadh. Firstly, the biggest reason is the population because Riyadh is the capital city of Saudi Arabia. Secondly, the price of cars gasoline is very cheap. So, that means to encourage people to use them cars. Thirdly, pupils can not arrive to the school in the time. So they will be late from their school.

    Now I will propose some solutions about this issue. The first solution is government should make diversity of transportation because it is the capital city. The second solution is government must put fees for some roads. It will make less traffic. The last solution is government should make another roads and build bridges. So people can not be late.

    In conclusion, I have written about traffic congestion in Riyadh and I proposed some solutions.


    Abdullah Alajmi
    381900823

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  12. In this essay I will say the problems of eating junk food , and its solutions . In the first paragraph I will say the problems, and in the second paragraph i will say the solutions.

    Junk food is a big problem for us because its effect our health in too many ways , and i will mention few . Firstly, junk food contain to much fats and calories which will make the person who eat it become obese. Secondly, it might make you have diabetes because of the amount of sugar and sweet. Thirdly, many people like to eat junk food continuously which can be a habit or you might be addict to it.

    We can solve the problem of eating junk food by too many ways, and in this paragraph I will mention two solutions. Firstly, you can eat junk food three or four times per month. Secondly, build restaurants that have a healthy food and not taking to much time it will be fast and healthy, the people will have no excuse.

    In conclusion, junk food is not very bad if you eat if you don’t have time because its fast and tasty , but you should be aware of its effects and diseases.

    381900641

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  13. In this essay I'm going to talk about traffic in Riyadh and two problems also two soultions.





    The first problem is the population is high and the roads in Riyadh aren't enough which makes compression for the streets. I think the government has to build more roads to decrease traffic.




    The second problem, employees
    and the students go and return in the same time. My suggestion is putting Special time for the students and another for the employees.




    To sum up my essay, people have to follow the rules.





    By: Mohammed Alazmi
    ID: 371900118

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  14. Many people says that eating junk food is better but some people disagree. Today I am going to talk about the problem and solution for eating junk food.

    There are several problems for eating junk food. First of all, Junk food contains a lot of fat that makes a person overweight, and cause heart disease. Secondly, It affects people with diabetes, especially when taking these meals with soft drinks.

    On the other hand, there are some possible solutions for eating junk food. First solution, Make junk food more expensive, which makes the people reduce from eating junk food. Second possible solution, make the restaurants pay taxes.

    In conclusion, I think the people should not eat junk food because it affects our health in badly way.

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  15. Today I'm going to talk about traffic problems and solutions in Riyadh.



    as we all know traffic in Riyadh has many problems.First,The absence of public transport is one of the main reasons for the aggravation of this problem day after day.Second,The indifference of driving drivers since most of them do not have a driver's license, let alone who gets it without a theoretical and practical test, and this makes us not surprised by the actions of drivers on the road.

    The solutions are as follows.First,Activate the role of public transport, whether bus or metro system.Second,Don't grant a driver's license to anyone without a test and give a tax to anyone who does not have the license.

    In conclusion,the government should focus on this,and people must be carful.


    Abdulrahman Al-Somali.
    381901596.

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  16. *Before you read: This is the version 2 of Eating junk food so it's the same essay that I wrote last week and shared it here but with some differences such as removing some parts and making it more simple. For me I still prefer to use passive in some parts and add more details, for example, in the introduction because what's important to me is to write the best I have as possible as I can. So this is not exactly the way that I like to write but feedback is very welcome and that's exactly why I'm sharing this.

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    In this essay, I am going to explain the problems and solutions of eating junk food.

    Thare are many problems of eating junk food. First, eating junk food everyday could cause some heart disease. When people eat more fast food, the more they get overweight. Second, eating junk food is cheap and very easy to carry so some people give up eating healthy food.

    On the other hand, there are some suggested solutions. The first solution is to produce more healthy food and make it easier to carry. Also, making films and videos to encourage people eating healthy food is another solution. The second solution is to decrease producing junk food. Also, it's a good idea to make healthy food cheaper.

    In conclusion, it's a good idea to reduce junk food as possible as we can.

    By: FADEL AL DAHNIM
    ID: 381901273

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  17. Many people eat junk food. However, others don’t eat it. In this essay, I am going to talk about problem and solution of eating fast food.

    There are many problems with eating fast food. First, if you eat a lot of fast food, you will be fat and you will not find cloths to wear it. Second, if you eat a lot of junk food you will have a lot of diseases. For example, you will have a cancer.

    For every problem, there are some solution. Firstly, the government should put taxes on junk food. Secondly, you should do exercises every day.

    To sum up, as you can see, junk food hurts our bodies. We must stop eating it

    Ahmed Alzahrani
    ID# 381900539

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  18. Today I am going to take about Eating junk food the problem and solution.

    Firstly A lot of people around the world they like junk food because it’s delicious and cheaper than the health food. I think the government should put a tax for the junk food to be more expensive because I think it’s to cheap new.

    Secondly , The Junk food it’s unhealthy because a lot of oil and fat af you eat junk food all the time you will be overweight and sick. You should the people focus a but what they eat.

    Finally Af you eat the junk food once in the week it’s not problem and be healthy it’s good for your body and your health.
    Nasser almulhim
    381900998

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  19. Today I'm going to talk about the eating junk food and it's affect on our health


    First of all I will talk about the problems
    There are many problems, junk food couldn't be very harmful for your health it may cause serious problems such as diabetes and over weight and hart disease.


    Second i will talk about the Solution in my opinion I think that government should educate the people about the serious problems, also they should but some taxes for the restaurants who sell junk food.

    In the end I think we all responsible for our health and the shape we look so stay fit.

    Abdullah alenezi
    Id: 381900117

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  20. Eating junk food.

    Junk food is a controversial issue from a long time. In this essay I will write about the problems and solutions of junk food.

    There are two obvious problems about junk food.
    Firstly, junk food could cause long-term diseases such as heart and high blood pressure diseases. Another important problem is that junk food has strong relationship with obesity. As we can see in our daily life, people who eat a lot of junk food have bad shape bodies.

    There are two main solutions to this problem. First of all, governments should apply taxes on junk food. With this solution we might be able to reduce the number of people that eat junk food. In addition, we should publish a lot of brochures about how junk food is dangerous. For instance, stick these brochures with magazines and newspapers.

    In conclusion, junk food is so harmful if we exaggerate in it. Governments should make people more careful and aware about junk food because what it could do. Finally, I hope by the coming years junk food disappears.

    Abdulrahman Al-Ateeq
    381900907

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  21. Today i will write about

    Unemployment is serious problem that our government faces. Our leaders are trying their utmost best to solve it wisely. If it is not solved sooner, a social revolution may take plea to have its solution. The main cause of unemployment is the repaid growth of populations. Since independence the populations of India has increased by threes times its total. When people multiply, there raises the problems of unemployment and it becomes difficult for government to provide employment to a sufficient number of people. As a matter of principle it becomes the duty of government to provide employment to all as far as possible and we are blessed that our government is taking keen interest to solve this series problem of today. As the growth of populations is going unchecked, jobs and services in a given field commonly remains insufficient. When our youths do not find employment despite their best efforts, they get irritated and feel disappointed.


    There are three types of unemployment, viz., labor class who are not educated, educated persons without possessing any technical qualifications and technical persons such as engineers and technical. Let us implore them one by one

    abdulrahman alkhaldi
    381900723

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  22. Today I am going to talk about the major case of health problem which is junk food and I am going to suggest some solutions for this serious issue.

    In my opinion people shouldn’t eat junk food because it’s effect there health badly, however many people eat it. First of all junk food is cooking with a lot of oil and oil can heart the hart of the one who eat it and make the blood heaver. Second many people don’t have enough time to cook a health food for themselves so they order junk food because it saves time.

    Actually I’ll offer couple of solutions. Firstly government can teak taxes from junk food restaurant and produce healthy cheap restaurant so people are going to bay healthy food. Secondly we can wearied the people from junk food and its effects.

    To some up in this essay I wrote about the problems of junk food and some solutions.

    Hakm Hadi
    381901660

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  24. In this essay I'm going to talk about the problem of eating junk food and how to solve it. In the first paragraph I will talk about the problem and it's reasons and in the second paragraph I'll talk about the solutions.

    First of all, Many people eat junk food frequently. Although, they know that junk food is harmful for their body but still eating it. Also, sometime when they have food in their house the go to fast food restaurant. Moreover, junk food leads to a lot of diseases eating more sugar cause diabetes, you will be fat and you will infected by stroke or high blood pressure.

    We can solve the problem of eating junk food by too many ways, and in this paragraph I will mention two solutions. Firstly, you can eat junk food three or four times per month. Secondly, build restaurants that have a healthy food and not taking to much time it will be fast and healthy, the people will have no excuse.

    In conclusion,junk food is not very bad if you eat if you don’t have time because its fast and tasty ,I think the people should not eat junk food because it affects our health in badly way.


    Name/Abdulaziz AL-Shebanah
    ID/371100552

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  25. Today, i’m going to talk about the causes and problems of junk food. Firstly Many people eat fast food regularly and have a lot of health problems that may affect people. One of the reasons for eating fast food is obesity, which causes overweight. Second point, increase in sugars, Causing cancer, as well as people to diabetes, especially when eating these meals with soft drinks. One of the solutions that a person must eat is to eat healthy meals and not to think about eating junk food. Restaurants should provide healthy meals instead of harmful meals.

    In conclusion we should teach children healthy diets and teach them some exercises that benefit them.

    Ahmad almalki
    ID:371900839

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  26. Traffic in Riyadh

    Traffic in Riyadh is a big problem and it has lots of effects on people. For example, many people get to their work late because they take long time driving on the road. Also, students cannot arrive to their school on time because of traffic jam. However in this essay I am going to discuss some of a good things that can be a solutions for this problem.

    The first solution for this problem is build more new roads. This can be a good solution. For example, if the government build new roads, many employees and students will arrive early and without any problem. Also, it will reduce the traffic jams. However, the bad things of this solution is that it take long time to build new roads and it cost a lot of money.

    Secondly, establish schools and supermarkets near houses is a good idea. It will prevent traffic congestions. For example, if we establish schools and supermarkets near hoses, many people will leave their car at their homes and will be able to get to their schools and supermarkets by walking. However, the disadvantage of this solution is that it take a long time and the government has far important things it should look after it.

    In conclusion, although there are a lot of good things for this problem, in my opinion I think the best solution is taxing on the special roads. For example, if the government tax on the special roads and put a high fee , it will benefit the economy and it will be able to solve another problems.
    Majed alharthi .
    ID / 371900541

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