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Population of Hungary
ReplyDeleteAs we can see from the graph the population of Hungary is decreasing, in 1996 the population was 10.3 million approx, after 10 years the population became 10.1 approx.
I think this problem become because of the birth control so, they don't have children or just 1 to 3 children maximum.
Another point is that, they could have procreation problems so, they can't procreation, or maybe the living there has became more and more expensive.
The earth planet is quite big so, we don't have problems with procreation, people shouldn't stop procreation because we will extinct when we stop procreation.
To conclude people should procreation with the limit other ways we will extinct like dinosaurs.
In 1945 only 30% of women completed their secondary education and 1% went on to a first degree. No women had completed post-graduate studies. This situation had changed radically by 1995. In 1995, 90% of women in Someland had completed secondary education and of those, half had graduated from an initial degree and 20% had gone on to postgraduate studies. At the other end of the scale we can see that by 1995 all girls were completing lower secondary, although 10% ended their schooling at this point. This is in stark contrast with 1945 when only 30% of girls completed primary school, 35% had no schooling at all and 35% only.
ReplyDeleteIn the graph shown in front of you in the years 1945 and 1995. Due to the results given to women is to be the highest in the graph shown in 1945
ReplyDeleteIn 1945 he completed only 30% of women education and went remaining 1% to the first degree. When a woman finishes her studies, a graduate. This situation changed in 1995, 90% of women in the same degree of education, a secondary .. and can see the other part of the painting in 1995, all the girls had completed their studies in the secondary, but in the table shows there are those who have completed the study and by 10%. Witness the girls that have not completed primary school in 1945, only 30% of the passed, they are 35% did not complete the study at all, and 35% completed in the third row only ..
It can express this abbreviated drawing, the graduation for girls and getting a positive and useful.
MISHAL ALMARWAN
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Hungary is a landlocked country in central Europe, which borders with no fewer than seven countries: Slovakia, Ukraine, Romania, Serbia, Croatia, Slovenia and Austria. The country is mostly flat, with low mountains in the north. The most important sectors of Hungary’s economy in 2015 were industry (27.4 %), wholesale and retail trade, transport, accommodation and food services (18.3 %) and public administration, defence, education, human health and social work activities (17.6 %). Hungary’s main export partners are Germany, Romania and Slovakia, while its main import partners are Germany, China and Austria.
ReplyDeleteThe population composition at the foundation of Hungary (895) depends on the size of the arriving Hungarian population and the size of the Slavic (and remains of Avar-Slavic) population at the time. One source mentions 200 000 Slavs and 400 000 Hungarians, while other sources often don't give estimates for both, making comparison more difficult. The size of the Hungarian population around 895 is often estimated between 120 000 and 600 000,with a number of estimates in the 400-600 000 range. Other sources only mention a fighting force of 25 000 Magyar warriors used in the attack, while declining to estimate the total population including women and children and warriors not participating in the invasion. In the historical demographics the largest earlier shock was the Mongol Invasion of Hungary, several plagues also took a toll on the country's population.
As the number of births declined at a lower rate than that of deaths, the natural decrease of Hungaryʼs population moderated from 20,503 in January–April 2015 to 13,725 persons in the first four months of 2016, which meant a decrease of 33%, according to a first release of data from Hungary’s Central Statistical Office (KSH) today.
In the first four months of 2016, 29,221 children were born, which was 138 (0.5%) lower than the value in January–April 2015, while the number of deaths was 42,946.
The number of marriages during the first four months rose dramatically by 30% as compared to the base period, the rise in February being the most notable, when the adjusted number of marriages exceeded last yearʼs value by 33%.
There were 9 live births and 13.2 deaths per thousand inhabitants, while the number of infant deaths was 4.2 per thousand live births in the first four months of the year, KSH said.
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In recent years , the population of hungry has decreased. This mean condition of poor people and homeless people has changed. However, the graph shows the changes of population of hungry from 1996 to 2007.
ReplyDeleteAs you see in the graph the population of hungry decreased gradually. You can see the population in 1996 was over 10.30 millions but by the year 2007 it fell down to roughly 10.05 million. so, there was a decrease of 0.25 million people. Also ,as the graph shown between each two years there was a decrease about 2.03 millions. That was maybe because of the new developments in the country.
In conclusion, we can see the rate of population of hungry dropped through the whole period.
Hussain ali alsabi
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In this diagram, I'm going to describe the population of Hungary. First, I will take about a specific period was start between 1996 to 2007. Also, what had happened in this period. So, this graph show how does the population of Hungary increased and decreased.
ReplyDeleteThe population of Hungary start from 1996 to 2007. In 1996 the number of population was approximately the highest number it is 10.32 million. Also, in 1996 to 2007 population was decreased. Because the population come down than before. In 1997 the population more than the population in 1998.
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The pie charts compare the highest level of education achieved by women in Someland across two years, 1945 and 1995. It can be clearly seen that women received a much higher level of education in Someland in 1995 than they did in 1945.
ReplyDeleteIn 1945 only 30% of women completed their secondary education and 1% went on to a first degree. No women had completed post-graduate studies. This situation had changed radically by 1995. In 1995, 90% of women in Someland had completed secondary education and of those, half had graduated from an initial degree and 20% had gone on to postgraduate studies. At the other end of the scale we can see that by 1995 all girls were completing lower secondary, although 10% ended their schooling at this point. This is in stark contrast with 1945 when only 30% of girls completed primary school, 35% had no schooling at all and 35% only completed the third grade.
In conclusion, we can see that in the 50 years from 1945 to 1995 there have been huge positive developments to the education levels of women in Someland.
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When we are going to talk about Hungary, we can notice some changes over the years about the population. But there were a negative changes. In this essay I would like to describe that changes, reasons and effects, which have happened as a results of that, and at the end I would like to suggest some solution for that issue.
ReplyDeleteAs the graph shows, in the 1996 the population was in its highest level, which was approximately over 10.30 million. Comparing to the level in 2007, which was almost above 10.05 million. So that shows, the decreasing sharply of the population. In addition, between 1997 and 2001, the population fell down from 10.30 to 10.20 million. Furthermore, we can notice that the population decreased slightly to roughly above 10.05.
However, there are some reasons behind that sharp decreasing of the population in Hungary. Such as, wars which happened in Hungary. They increased the average of deaths, wars have destroyed people's homes. Also, the weakness of economy caused it in a negative way, it have limited their ability to decade and deal with other counties. Rather than, the medicine was not advance, so that caused an increasing in the percentage of illnesses.
So, my advice to solve these issues that they have to attempt to fix what wars have destroyed, and encourage their individuals to work and study hard to improve and support their country. Also they should send the best students to study abroad, to come back and benefit the country.
Hassan Ahmad Al-Bohassan.
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ReplyDeletePopulation of Hungary
ReplyDeleteIn this diagram, I'm going to talk about population of hungery ,As we can see In the top of the page the population of Hungary is decreasing, in 1996 the population is10.3 million , after 1996 to 2006 the population became 10.1million.
I think this problem become because of the government make people has a specific number of children ,they shouldn't have more than 1 child.
Another point is that, the life there became more expensive,so the will not has a baby because they don't have money to feed there children.
We life in a huge world so they don't have to reduce the number of people,also so many countries give who has a baby salary to feed him.
To conclude ,i thik the government make the people has more than 3 children , the humanity will extant if they doesn't have children.
Safwan altwairqi
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Population of hungry
ReplyDeletePopulation of hungry has decreased in recent years. The numbers of poor people is change in last years. Governments and Social organizations tried to help the hungry people. However, the graph show the decrease in population of hungry between of 1996 to 2007.
As we see in the graph the population of hungry in 1996 is 10.32 million. Then its start to decrease gradually. The governments start to help poor people. And the social organizations deal with restaurants to take the extra food and give it to poor people.
However, by year 2007 it fell down to 10.7 million.
In conclusion, as we see in the last years the population of hungry is decrease.
Ahmed alosaif
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Population of Hungary
ReplyDeleteAs we see the population in Hungary is decreasing ,From 1996 the population numbers were almost 10.36 million and The numbers of people are decreasing until 2007 and the number of people has decreased until these year , I think the reason for this decline Is the many diseases and people's attacks because the poor , And hunger .
turki alotaibi
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When we are going to talk about Hungary, we can notice some changes over the years about the population. But there were a negative changes. In this essay I would like to describe that changes, reasons and effects, which have happened as a results of that, and at the end I would like to suggest some solution for that issue.
ReplyDeleteAs the graph shows, in the 1996 the population was in its highest level, which was approximately over 10.30 million. Comparing to the level in 2007, which was almost above 10.05 million. So that shows, the decreasing sharply of the population. In addition, between 1997 and 2001, the population fell down from 10.30 to 10.20 million. Furthermore, we can notice that the population decreased slightly to roughly above 10.05.
However, there are some reasons behind that sharp decreasing of the population in Hungary. Such as, wars which happened in Hungary. They increased the average of deaths, wars have destroyed people's homes. Also, the weakness of economy caused it in a negative way, it have limited their ability to decade and deal with other counties. Rather than, the medicine was not advance, so that caused an increasing in the percentage of illnesses.
So, my advice to solve these issues that they have to attempt to fix what wars have destroyed, and encourage their individuals to work and study hard to improve and support their country. Also they should send the best students to study abroad, to come back and benefit the country
Rakan Aldossari
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Poplution in hungery were a lot for example in 1996 the poplution were 10'35. Compare to 2007 the number had dicreased. For ten years the nuber of population has dicreased too sharp. There many reasons for the dicreasing number.
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