Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Hello B1P students, Week#1



Write an entry of at least 250 words individually and/or collaboratively about a problem-solution essay on (write on only ONE topic per week):

1-Traffic in Riyadh.
2-Eating junk food.
3-Pollution caused by factories in Jubail Industrial city.

Clearly express your ideas, opinions, feelings, views, etc about the topic.
Do Not worry about grammatical errors; this is a fluency rather than an accuracy activity.

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  2. The term junk food itself defines to the foods that do no good to your body and they are completely unimportant to the body. Junk foods have no or very less nutritional value and irrespective of the way they are marketed, they are not healthy to consume.

    Most of them are high in saturated fats and sugar components and also excess of salts and lack any fiber. The only reason of their gaining popularity and increased trend of consumption is that they are ready to eat or easy to cook foods.

    Also the ease of manufacturing and consumption makes the junk food market spread its influence so rapidly. People, of all age groups are moving towards junk food as it is hassle free and often ready to grab and eat.

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  3. Riyadh has many problems with traffic.The traffic jams of Riyadh are causing many serious problems such as difficulties in carrying patients to hospitals and reaching schools, offices and airports on time.Traffic jams peak at 7 a.m. when students go to school and employees start their commute.



    In my opinion Solution to traffic in Riyadh is to encourage the use of public transport.Put buses and subway to transport students and staff.Do not make a lot of reforms in the roads.

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  4. Traffic in Riyadh


    Crazy drivers are the first problem in Riyadh because they are driven without main and they use their mobile phone when they drive, but the government still looking for the solution to the drivers who do not care about the people.

    The first problem is the high speed this can end your life because you exceed the legal speed after that you will lose the control of your car, then you will get bad accident or you will die also there is no doubt with that so when you had an accident you will cause the congestion in the street.
    In logical thinking and every good person want that the government should but high traffic violation for these people because some people do not respect the rules.

    Secondly, the crowded in the morning and afternoon I mean this time for the student and staff to arrive to their jobs or school. I know we will not be able to solve the whole problem, but we should try.
    The solution for this problem is building many bridges to less the number of crowded in Riyadh or to ease the move there because the street will be full cars. I know this will be more expensive project, however, the government should build the bridges to help people to move without problem.

    In my opinion the beast solution for traffic in Riyadh is building a lot of bridges to help the tourists to stay in Riyadh without problem.

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  5. Traffic in Riyadh

    Traffic in Riyadh is a big problem and it has lots of effects on people. For example, many people get to their work late because they take long time driving on the road. Also, students cannot arrive to their school on time because of traffic jam. However in this essay I am going to discuss some of a good things that can be a solutions for this problem.

    The first solution for this problem is build more new roads. This can be a good solution. For example, if the government build new roads, many employees and students will arrive early and without any problem. Also, it will reduce the traffic jams. However, the bad things of this solution is that it take long time to build new roads and it cost a lot of money.

    Secondly, establish schools and supermarkets near houses is a good idea. It will prevent traffic congestions. For example, if we establish schools and supermarkets near hoses, many people will leave their car at their homes and will be able to get to their schools and supermarkets by walking. However, the disadvantage of this solution is that it take a long time and the government has far important things it should look after it.

    In conclusion, although there are a lot of good things for this problem, in my opinion I think the best solution is taxing on the special roads. For example, if the government tax on the special roads and put a high fee , it will benefit the economy and it will be able to solve another problems.


    Name : Hussain Al sabi
    ID : 371100359

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  7. Junk Food

    How many one of us isn't eating junk food? It's been normal even though it's very harmful and unhealthy choices, let's talk about junk food problems and solutions for this problem.

    The first problem is that most of the junk food restaurants have a genetically modified foods which are harmful for us, all restaurants should use organic foods only because they're healthier for us than the genetically modified foods.

    The second problem is that the junk food restaurants have a foods which have a lot of fats and sugars, the restaurants need to be humanistic and prepare the foods by a healthy way.

    The third problem is the nutrition values are very low so you will fill your body with unwholesome foods, the restaurants should try to increase the food's nutrition values.

    Fourth problem is the junk food leads to a lot of disease like, high blood pressure, diabetes, some times even cancer, and some psychology disease, and that's the main problem which keeps the junk food restaurants very harmful for humans! And we shouldn't eat from them.

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  8. TRAFFIC IN RIYADH

    Many of the people who live in Riyadh suffer from some traffic problems which require to solutions. These issues make people late, waste their fuel, put them in bad situations and other disadvantages of them. In this essay, I will show some solutions for these problems.

    First of all, The government should rise the limits of the speed on the bystreets from 80 to 100 km/h. If they rise it, the employees, students and the other workers will can commute their work early. However, unless they make it 100 km/h and the workers live far away from their work, they will be late. Yet, if the government rise the limits of speed, there will be a lot of accidents. According to that, this solution could be efficient, but it could be dangerous for people also.

    Second point, the government should make more parking on the streets, in front of supermarkets and the other important congested places. The reason for this is sometimes there is rush hour because there are no parking. Also, the government can convince a lot of congestion charges if they make more parking. Another reason, the vandalism will become less if there are more parking because some people if they do not find parking attempt to park above the sidewalk. On the contrary, this solution could cost much money from the country because it require a lot of materials.

    In conclusion, these solutions have some advantages and some disadvantages for government and people. In my opinion, I think the second solution is better than the first one to solve some of traffic problems. This is because the second reason is safer than the first one and it has more benefits.




    Hassan Ahmed Helal Al-Bohassan.
    ID:371900194
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  9. Eating junk food
    In many countries, people often eat at fast food restaurants. This is a problem because people who eat too much junk food may develop serious illnesses, such as heart disease and diabetes. However, there are several solutions to this problem. The first solution is that the government should make healthy food less expensive than junk food. For example, it could give farmers money to grow cheap fruit and vegetables. As a result, people might eat more cheap and healthy food and less junk food. A second solution to the problem of junk food is that schools should teach children about nutrition. This is important because if children eat junk food all the time, they may develop health problems. For instance, if children become obese, they could get diabetes and need medicine. Finally, families should make sure that their children eat more healthy food. For instance, parents could give their children a healthy lunch to take to school, instead of giving them money to buy lunch. Because of this, those children would not have money to spend on junk food and they would have to eat healthily. In conclusion, although the issue of people eating too much junk food affects many countries, there are solutions to this problem. The government should make healthy food cheaper, schools should give their students nutrition education, and parents should give their children healthy school lunches. I believe that everybody should eat more healthy food because good health is very important.

    Mishal Almarwan.
    371900823

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  10. So, in conclusion, although fast food tastes good and eating it once in a while is fine, eating fast food too frequently may result in health problems such as obesity or diabetes. The problems caused by fast food are mainly in the high sugar, salt and fat content in it. The amounts of sugar, salt and fat are too much for the body to handle, and so cause problems. There are some existing solutions to this problem..
    Don't eat fast food. However, this may cause a craving or wish to eat fast food. That could lead to binge eating when the person cannot stop themselves from eating it. Binge eating harms the body.
    Eat once in a while. This solution has been tried and tested and it works. Many people do this, however, if you do not realise that you are eating it too frequently, there is still a chance of you getting health problems.

    Abdulaziz alkhaldi
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  12. Eating junk Food

    Eating junk food had became very popular lately, because it is tasty,cheap, and fast to prepare. but, there is a lot of consequences of eating junk food .

    eating junk food is bad for your health because in contain lots of fat, and the oil that they fry it in is used more than ones, and that could cause a heart problems over the years.

    the best way to avoid eating junk food is to eat more at home, and at healthy restaurants. sea food is great for the body, it has a lot of nutritional value, especially tuna and salmon.

    to sum up, eating junk food will effect your health in a bad way, and we should eat healthy food, yeah sure healthy food is expensive ,but, it is like what they say, our body deserve the best .

    Ammar Alomran
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  13. Eating junk food
    Now a day's junk food become popular. Most people eat it. Easy to find it and quick. In this essay I will explain the risks of junk food and some diseases caused by it. And how can we avoid it.
    Junk food contain a lot of fats. Eating so much fats cause many diseases. High brusher one of the diseases. Also Harte disease caused by eating much fats. When we eat a lot of junk food our bodies saved fats which leads to obesity.
    We can avoid junk food by cooking our meal in home instead of restaurants. For example, when you need to eat meat bay a fresh meat and do it at home. However, you can go to a good restaurants and have a fresh food.
    In conclusion, sometimes you have to go to fast food restaurants, no problem in that. But you should decrease the amount as much as possible.

    ahmed al-osaif
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  14. Traffic in Riyadh
    Riyadh is the biggest city in Saudi Arabia , and there lives a lot of people . So I want to wright about it .
    Riyadh is a beautiful and popular city , but it has many problems . like traffic jam , no parking , speed in the road and transport .
    However , there are many solution for these problems .
    First of all , the government should build more bridge also build metro .
    Second point , also the government should put more things for the speeding car . And I think the accident will be lees than now so all of this important to do .
    In conclusion , my opinion about Riyadh its good city and more beautiful than Dammam , But I think Riyadh its great for vications not for live .

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  15. Traffic in Riyadh is most problem for anyone even if you are working in a company or study at school or university .

    Riyadh its a capital for Saudi Arabia and also its a biggest city, Therefore because its a big city it has some problems, one of them is traffic its the most problem in Riyadh it will make late for your job or your home also if you have an emergency in your home you can't help them quick .

    I think the solution for this problem is bulding a highway or metro station , I guess it will help the people who lives in riyadh to not be late on their job or home.

    In conclusion, my opinion about traffic in Riyadh people should wake up early and go to their jobs to avoid stock on the traffic.

    Abdulaziz
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  16. junk food

    Junk food is a kind of food but it isn't natural, it's full of calories and oil,it's also came fried and cooked in factories.

    Many people eat junk food because it's delicious and cheap and you can find it anywhere,but it has a negative effects for people health,
    it's cause many diseases like Obesity and cancer and also diabetes.

    The junk food issue, and for every issue there is solution.
    First,you have to avoid the junk as much as you can,and cook your own food in the house, for example you are hungry and you want to eat some chicken you can order it from restaurant or you cook it at home,it's healthy and also fun .

    Second,the government should make a new taxes on junk food to make people buy more fresh food, and make the natural food less cheaper, by that many people will be more healthier and make them save some money.

    Finally,i think if anyone wants to be a healthy he have to avoid the junk food restaurant ,and eat natural food instead of junk food,and do some exercise every day.

    Safwan altwairqi
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  17. traffic in riyadh

    the big problem about traffic in riyadh are the small streets are often crowdedis and there are lots of trucks in the small road however i am going to write some problem and solution


    the first problem for crowdedis is the accident ,there is some people driving very speed and thay will lose the control and absolutely there is will be accident the , Everyone knows that in Riyadh a lot of taxi drivers It is known that the more taxi drivers increased the chance of congestion


    The solution of the crowded to build a lot of highway ,There must be truck entry dates And their departure ,And educate drivers on how to drive safely



    ‏In the conclusion, people should be educated about driving safely and not using conclusion mobile while driving

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  18. Riyadh city is the number one that has traffic in its city. Riyadh is the capital of Saudi Arabia, and it has many people on this city. The population of this city are about 7000000 people. So, Riyadh has problem with traffic. There are many problems and solution for traffic.

    First of all this essay will begin with the problems of this traffic. First, most of the workers go to their jobs on the same time and the students too. Also they finish at the same time. Second, most the students and the workers go by own cars. Third, the people don't have anther transportation like, subway, buses, or underground. Also, the weather of this city is so hot. The people can't use bicycle to move from one place to another place for long distances especially on summer.

    However, there are solutions for these problems, and each problem has a solution. First, the government of Saudi Arabia should build a subway and underground for the people, and the government should make the gasoline high price because it will be helpful to make the people use the subway. Second, the government should change the time for the workers or the students to decrease the traffic in Riyadh city. Also, they can build more streets for only cars and build streets for only buses.

    In the short, the government can develop this city to solve these problems and make it better and helpful. In my opinion, I believe if the government follows these solutions, it will decrease the traffic in this city.

    Rakan Aldossri
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